The Protectors
My
story is going to start in a flash forward with the main character Chris Volk
walking inebriated down an alley way holding a beer.
He
oversees at the end of an alleyway a group of thugs in a fight against one man,
feeling confident he attempts to help the lone man.
As
he gets closer he realises the lone man is wearing a dark hooded costume,
covering all of his skin and a form of high tech body armour.
The
hooded character does not need Chris’ help but the thugs now move on to Chris
as the thugs have noticed him and the hooded character is outnumbered
physically but not outnumbered in skill.
Chris
is overpowered and beaten by the thugs because of his drunken state, then the
hooded character fends off all of the thugs and as he is helped up by the
faceless hero the leader of the thugs turns around and draws a pistol as the hero's back is turned
away from them.
THUG: This is from Benz!
As
he finish his exclamation the hero turns to face him just as the bullet hits
him in the chest.
The
thugs run off and Chris pulls himself up and to look at the hero. As he does so
the hero turn to look at him and exclaims in confusion.
Hero: Chris?! What are you
doing here?i thought you was at home training?
Shocked,
Chris holds the hero's head in comfort and pulls down the mask covering the
hero’s face.
Chris: Dad?! What are you
doing here? Why are you in a costume fighting thugs and muggers?
Dad: Take this, it will explain
everything, I love you son
The
hero passes to his son a golden, odd looking key on a chain neckless. As he
accepts the key the hero's eyes close and a voice over cuts in.
Chris (Voice over): I never
thought that would happen when I woke up this morning. Not the best 21st
birthday party, actually tonight was my only real party I ever had, and it was
all because of this girl.
Scene
fades out and goes back 2 weeks earlier. Chris is in a shop buying groceries
and general food when he bumps into a good looking woman who he instantly falls
for.
Chris: I'm so sorry, my
minds on other things.
Girl: I bet, that stuff
looks boring what you got in there!
Chris: ha I'm on a sort of
strict diet, my dads very strict on what I do and eat.
Girl: Sounds fun to be you.
Chris: I'm Chris by the
way....
Girl: Nice to meet you
Chris.
Chris: You not going to
tell me your name?
Girl: yes I will, if you
come to my party in two weeks? The 6Th of June?
Chris: Erm I can’t its my
birthday and I'm not allowed out too late or any alcohol, Dads orders.
Girl: its your birthday,
your not allowed out or any alcohol, WHAT!Come on sneak out how old are you?
You a man or a mouse? Come I wanna tell you my name.
Chris: well I’ll be 21, and
do I really look like a mouse?
Girl: jees your 21 and your
not allowed drink or to be out late, right your coming I don't care what you
say, where do u live I’ll get you at 8 in two weeks.
Chris: Erm do you know Volk
House?
Girl: what the massive
mansion on the river?
Chris: Yeah that's me.
Fades
to voice over.
Chris: I spent all of my
time growing up with my dad, my mum was killed in a car crash, the driver of
the on coming car going the wrong way was drunk, I was in the back and luckily
completely UN harmed. My dad raised me, trained me in all kinds of fighting
styles, kung fu, karate and tai chi are my favorite as well as using weapons
like swords but mostly stick fighting. He also home schooled me, I love
science, and so does my dad being a scientist and all as well as a
archaeologist. My dad keeps me busy but more recently I realised he’s kept me
busy as well as distracting me from the fact that I am being kept away from
everyone, I only really get to talk to our butler and people I meet when
collecting my dads shopping. It seems though when I do talk to others I seem to
be massive in body size and intellect, maybe its the home schooling and martial
arts?
With
the voice over running we are shown a montage of clips of Chris in a car crash
with is mum, followed by him training from a young age with his dad until now
in different variants of martial arts and finally showing him now and his
towering physique and mental capacity. (Through books and amounts of work he
does).
Voice overs
and montage fades to Chris after an argument following Chris asking to go out
for his birthday and his dad banning him from leaving the grounds tonight, he
disobeys and Chris sneaks out on the 6Th
June at around 7:3opm and meeting up with the mysterious girl.
Following
the story will jump to him at the party getting quite inebriated and having a
good time and the final revelation of this mysterious girls name.
Then
we flash forward to the start and Chris is holding the mysterious golden key and
decided to avenge his father and in doing so he take his fathers body home and
finds a mysterious hidden door way with a square shaped key hole, that opens up
into a hidden rooms within his dads private room.
Inside
he discovers newspaper articles and magazines about his dad as this hooded hero
and lastly turns to see a costume exactly his size in a glass container with a
21St banner around it and an open laptop but before he can view the
computer screen he is interrupted by the butler.
The
camera turns to Chris as he turns to the butler wearing his costume all except
his mask/hood revealing to the butler his bloodied and bruised face.
Chris: Benz killed the
cities protector, now they have a new, younger, fitter model to deal with, with
a vengeance.
The
scene finishes with Chris putting on his mask and hood then the scene fades to
darkness.
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