Beginning:
The start of the story starts with a drunken character
walking down an alleyway and attempts to help a hooded figure in a fight against
a group of thugs, the character gets beaten up and the hooded figure saves him
but as the group runs away the hooded figure is shoot by one of the thugs and
the figure falls into the main characters arms.
Then it fades to the introduction to the main character (through
a flashback) that from a young age has been trained by his scientist father in
all variants of martial arts and trained to his physical peek. As well as this
he is home schooled and taught by his single parent dad again to his mental
peek as well as his butler so that he is tuned and adapted to his peek of
mental and physical capabilities.
The introduction is a jump straight into an action scene
followed by a flashback which explains the initial action scene, then a brief
run through of his life from a young age until just before his 21st
birthday where he has stuck to his training and is a god amongst normal men and
then catches back up to the start of the story. It is also established that his
father is getting older and sticking to the training but becoming in superior
to his sons abilities.
Body of the story:
The week before his birthday whilst out and around town he
is doing he usual shopping and meets a woman who he instantly falls for and who
tempts him to disobey his dad and escape the night of his birthday as, after
explaining that he is not getting a party or a big celebration she tells him
they should meet up because it is his 21st birthday so should
celebrate properly.
After escaping for his birthday he returns home and takes a
shortcut through an alleyway (the flashback goes back to the start of the
story) and sees a hooded, costumed figure in a fight with a group of men.
As he is trained to his physical peek and a bit over
confident but quite drunk as he has never experience alcohol before he sticks
up for the hooded figure and gets beaten up by the attackers. The hooded figure
saves our hero and once the attackers are finished with and are running away
one turns around and draws a pistol and shoots the hooded figure as he is
helping our hero of the floor.
The hooded figure dies in the alley with him and just before
he dies he reveals that it is his dad and that he was beaten because he is
getting too old, not because of him but our hero blames himself for his fathers
death.
At his funeral he receives all of his dad’s possessions
including his house and cars etc and is lastly given a golden key on a chain by
his butler and told that his father wanted him to have it and that he would
know where to use it. Attached is a letter telling him that his uncle may be
able to give extra help if his butler couldn’t answer any of his questions he
might.
Later it is found that his uncle is a mole and is actually
working for/ leader of the enemy’s, which his father didn’t know about.
The death of his father makes our hero determined to carry
on his training and take his place as the hooded figure and avenge his death even though he knows his
dad doesn’t want him to follow in his footsteps because his training was to
defend himself from the threat of others in the world, but he ignores this fact
and decides he must have been training him for a better purpose and to replace
him because why else was he being trained to the level he is at and he wishes
to avenge his death as it was “his” fault he is dead.
End:
After overcoming some challenges both mentally and physically
the hero finds the attacker that killed his father and takes him down and
converts or kills his uncle due to him being a mole in the organisation as well
as the mob boss that is in charge of the criminals of the city. And obviously gets the girl and becomes a
well known and well feared and respected hero of the city.
Dan out x
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